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Tuesday 1 November 2016

The Flying Albatross




Swift, Strong, Striking.

Glidingly, Lightly, Happily

Soaring through the wind like a bullet.

Smoothly.

Smart.

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  1. Mrs Petrie7 November 2016 at 16:03

    Hi Jayden - great use of words. It would be fantastic to know what your learning outcome was.

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    1. Anonymous8 November 2016 at 12:06

      I was learning to use words and make a picture in everyone's head that was reading my poem. I know I've been successful
      because yours and Ms O'Donnell's comments tell me that I have done a good job and used the right words. Another way that I have been successful is because I did my poem with no teacher help at all.

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  2. Anonymous7 November 2016 at 16:19

    I love your use of alliteration. It sounds like the sound of the bird swooshing through the air.

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